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a parasol lost in crashing waves
a bird with [broken] wings
always falling from the sky
like Icarus with burning [wings]
reach too high you fall to the bottom
lost in darkness without a light
cry to the skies like mountains [falling]
while you’re caught amidst the [strife]
a bird with [broken] wings
always falling from the sky
like Icarus with burning [wings]
reach too high you fall to the bottom
lost in darkness without a light
cry to the skies like mountains [falling]
while you’re caught amidst the [strife]
Full/real title: [Broken Wings Falling {in} Strife]
A little poem I came up with on the bus home from school...
and yes, I know there are no capitals, that was intentional
A little poem I came up with on the bus home from school...
and yes, I know there are no capitals, that was intentional
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Bah, wish you had critique on this 
, it's gorgeous. The first stanza in particular...the way you set words apart in it gives the piece a sort of multifaceted feel. Very nice.
, it's gorgeous. The first stanza in particular...the way you set words apart in it gives the piece a sort of multifaceted feel. Very nice.